Monday, June 10, 2013

My Favorite Day

 My Favorite Day

                                                by Veronica Ware, student sample work


My favorite day is when I get to go swimming in our pool. After I finish my work, I can go outside to play. 

First, I play with my ball. Then, I ride on my bike. When I am hot, I jump in the pool and swim. I like to dive to the bottom of the pool and then swim up. I make sure that I hold my breath when I swim so I would not drown. 



My mom does not let me stay in the pool too long. When I rest, I can go back into the pool. I like it best when my mom watches me do tricks in the water. Sometimes, we swim together and have a race. I have a good time. I wish that summer would never end. 


Short Words Use Rubric

I must find ten short vowel words in my story. Can you help me find more? Continue the short vowel word chain by adding your own words. Just click on the comment section below this blog. See if we can reach 1,000 short vowel words. 

1. swim   
2.  is 
3. wish  
4. not 
5. do 
6. water 
7. jump 
8. drown 
9. tricks
10. watches

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